Does this sentence contain too many commas?

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there's lot more wrong sentence commas. think you're trying cram information 1 sentence, , doesn't fit seamlessly together. try breaking 2 sentences.

try - inside caves, paintings , sculptures depicting life , incarnations of buddha, everywhere. type of artwork better known jataka tales.

"inside, caves full of paintings , sculpture depicted buddhist religious art, including jataka tales, show life , incarnations of buddha."

or.. else wrong it?
thank in advance. :)


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