Is my sister good at poetry?


same question. new poem. opinions?:). she's 12.

"goodbye",
she's dressed in tear-stained attire.
waves @ traitor, mourner, liar,
there's wave of faint laughter, cries,
bow heads down, there's no life in eyes,
discovers world beyond of own,
imagines , thinks of when she's alone.

same question. new poem. opinions?:). she's 12. "goodbye", she's dressed in tear-stained attire. waves @ traitor, mourner, liar, there's wave of faint laughter, cries, bow heads down, there's no life in eyes, discovers...


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