My friend said i should publish my poetry, what do you think?

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ive never studied poetry friend says im good. id professional opinion.
wrote of these in high school:

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music (written tribute ludwig van beethoven’s “moonlight sonata”)

music of singing soul.

dancing of crystal waters.

music burns heart , weeps in ashes.

set soul alight , sends mind drunken stupor.

tears @ flesh thorns of rose.
poisoning both joy , sorrow.

music of laughing willow.

music of crying sun.

music fills room black light , tries escape.

pushing , pounding @ walls demonic lust.

burns mind phoenix fire, in new thoughts blossom , expanded.

music falls on deaf ears.

dwindles candle in new world.

still stands strong tallest mountains.


music of loved,
loath,
blessed , cursed



, love so, dearly.


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thank love (i wrote girlfriend)

thank love feel each passing day,
thank warmth flows when hear name.

thank happy tears shed read words,
love you,
want you,
need you.
words can never return enough love them justice.


thank happiness feel in presences,

thank courage give me though day,

thank reminding me have heart,
, thank giving strength beat again.
shale beat you...

thank love, love, love

, thank greatest gift of all, you...
angel x


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chime (this school project , teacher loved it)

chime of clock 1 12 space of unknown.
can live, can die.
can celebrate, can morn.
can hope, can grieve.

history doesn’t last forever.

man in eyes of man.

eyes of eternity, small.


life death, eternity hasn’t moved,
mere blink
, then… knows.

life blossom once again, extinguished once more?

life go on after leave in paradise of our own making, or wasteland of lost hope?

such secrets, there no answers.

in case,

going?

ive never studied poetry friend says im good. id professional opinion. wrote of these in high school: ------------------------------------------- music (written tribute ludwig van beethoven’s “moonlight sonata”) music of singing soul. dancing...


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