How is my poetry writing?

-

write poems on occasions , know if i'm good. constructive criticism gladly appreciative.

cries above comes rainbow
smiles face completes symbol
need signal
sign stars above
aligned right,so bright raw love
picture of runs tears down cheek
rainbows crumble ashes, while knees tremble weak
now, never know
wish did though hi , hello
days stroll whistle favorite tune
tried sing once, never sing
left without goodbye
of guessed, made me cry
why question ask
never see again
@ funeral last
in dreams there smiling in sky
fades black , i'm stuck here asking why
why take heart , smash bits
rub in face every time hand ticks
wish farewell ever may
in heart, love, apple, eve

i write poems on occasions , know if i'm good. constructive criticism gladly appreciative. cries above comes rainbow smiles face completes symbol need signal sign stars above aligned right,so bright raw my...


Arts & Humanities Poetry Next



Comments

Post a Comment

Popular posts from this blog

Nissan Quest vans .. any bad reviews?

-
many engine problems nissan can seen here: http://search.yahoo.com/search;_ylt=amiz... chrysler , may god bless new child. we having having our 3rd child in december. looking @ different vans , both nissan quest vans. there bad reviews on them?? looking @ between 2004-2008 Cars & Transportation Car Makes Other - Car Makes Next
Read more

Volkswagen Beetle History, Mission, Strategy from 1930-1960 [need links]?

-
volkswagen beetle, known volkswagen type 1, economy car produced german auto maker volkswagen (vw) 1938 until 2003. used air cooled rear engined rear wheel drive (rr layout). on 21 million beetles produced in all. in 1950s, more comfortable , powerful european small cars, having been designed sustained high speed on autobahn, , became longest-running , most-produced automobile of single design. remained top seller in us, rear-wheel drive conventional subcompacts refined, , replaced front-wheel drive models. success owed extremely high build quality, , innovative, eye-catching advertising. beetle car benchmark both generations of american compact cars such chevrolet corvair, , subcompact cars such chevrolet vega , ford pinto. german equivalent , counterpart morris minor, renault 4cv, citroen 2cv, fiat 600, saab 92, , volvo pv444 immediate post-war european economy cars. 1948 citroen 2cv beginning of switch front wheel drive european manufacturers in 1960s , 1970s. volkswagen among la...
Read more

Short survey/interview questions for my English paper..plz help :)?

-
q1: art courses available @ high school? q2: last year of schooling took art course? q3: think involvement , participation in art courses have helped other subject courses (like english, math, history, etc)? q4: how many of subject courses (other art) have used visual aids? q5: think visual aids/references make easier understand learning? q6: type of learning or abilities have taken away art courses (deeper understanding or interpretation of something, responsibility, time management, creativity, etc)? q7: think art courses important development of learning , understanding people? in advance answer questions!! appreciate it!! know questions may confusing try answer them best can. :) q1: art courses available @ high school? q2: last year of schooling took art course? q3: think involvement , participation in art courses have helped other subject courses (like english, math, history, etc)? q4: how many of your... Education ...
Read more