Is this a good poem for a poetry jam?

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doing poetry jam english class , want thoughts on peom wrote....tell me yu think, advice nice!:]
btw, doesnt have in format or type. whatever want.

worth cost?
worth pain?
could've told truth
turned away
didn't mean
wasn't suppose seem way
ruined had , threw away
i'm reason tears on face
i'm reason i'm awake @ night
haunt me in dreams
, dont have strength fight
i'm still missing
still love
truth have been enough save life.

were doing poetry jam english class , want thoughts on peom wrote....tell me yu think, advice nice!:] btw, doesnt have in format or type. whatever want. worth cost? worth pain? could've told truth just...


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