I'm trying to write a book but I'm not sure if this beginning is good. Opinions please?

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when in doubt of you doing, should continue or stop? question taunts me every wakening moment of being in mason tech. going performing arts school had been dream of mine, in 1 having been having strange feeling. feeling makes me feel outsider, outcast, black sheep in herd of white sheep. teachers, students, principle give me cold shoulder , have doubted me since freshman year. so, mean isn’t meant be? luckily, moment find out.
i waited anxiously curtains part right before brown eyes. crowd sounded quiet except couple people, believe people isabelle, ashton, caleb, , eli. smiled slight, exhilarated here see me. well, 3 guy because had driven in new york. isabelle on other hand roommate see anytime wanted though still glad came. forest began announcing name, took deep breath. when took last breath, felt butterflies in stomach flutter wildly , adrenaline rushing , down spine.
“and moment have been waiting for, since don’t know guys seem thinking. might recall luke mason’s former partner or little red, present scarlett rose!” forest said.
the curtains parted empty auditorium exception of unknown mysterious figure. few minutes unable see him because of bright lights on stage. looked familiar, couldn’t quiet put finger on was. man had black hair, spiked up. wore eyeliner , pull off unlike other students @ school. facial features sharp , contoured. tall maybe foot taller me , seem kind of attrac-
“scarlett?” said interrupting thoughts.
the words didn’t emerge man’s mouth, frightened me bit seemed familiar.

when in doubt of you doing, should continue or stop? question taunts me every wakening moment of being in mason tech. going performing arts school had been dream of mine, in 1 having been having strange feeling. feeling with...


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