Are there any mistakes in my letter or better words I can use?

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possibly wondering "why should choose girl in engineering design , control of kinetic sculptures cluster?" have abundant amount of deserving candidates should select me participate in cluster number 2 @ cosmos. of justifications become more knowledgeable subject of kinetic sculptures. has consistently been 1 of interests. watch program
kinetic sculptures , gazed @ 1 artistic piece of art in television @ bmw museum impressive piece of craftiness comprising 714 metal balls suspended in air. speechless indescribable. absolutely astonishing how art behaving. have desired engineer particularly mechanical engineer. never affirmative wanted have career. once anticipated in legislative branch in congress however, when took u.s. history in 8th grade realized have created colossal error majoring in political science . participating in program determine if engineering proceed in future furthermore thank granting me opportunity explore wonders of science , mathematics.


living oceans , global climate change cluster seems perfect cluster me. green person. continuously advocate fellow peers recycle along conducting many effortless actions delay process of global warming such not applying hair spray, turning off lights when not in room, walk locations instead of using automobile, along many more. topic take pleasure in analyzing form productive delightful summer. love water , study marine biology @ ucsd next ocean beneficial me additionally marvelous adventure. find marine animals more interesting due them existing in unfamiliar environments , surroundings other land animals such horned lizard, potato beetle, , malaysian orchid
mantis. owing of sea animals have not been discovered yet 70% of ocean has not either. expanding knowledge animals live as 31,614 feet below sea level astonishing hence pitch black no sunlight. beholding how strive survival along other substances such analyzing structure of marine food web establish excellent summer. therefore please consider me candidate participate in living oceans , global climate change cluster

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