Is this Poetry any good?
don't write poetry making boyfriend our 1 year , got inspired. however, don't want give him need feed please let me know think , if think needs added feel free. grateful advise willing give ok here is..
never in life have felt way before
never in life before walked in front door
here never same
have fallen way deep have myself blame
risk have taken may result in broken-heart
, though i'm sure pay
believe when
never part
because meant forever , always.
ok thats go opinions , feedback wanted!!
 i don't write poetry making boyfriend our 1 year , got inspired. however, don't want give him need feed please let me know think , if think needs added feel free. grateful advise are...
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